13th Crit with Andy

I knew I wanted to speak to Andy again because he knows what I am doing, and that saves time. I wanted to ask him mainly about my Taxidermy brief. 
He gave me some great advice about how to polish up my typography skills and layout. His feedback sheet is below. I need to look at widowing and get rid of it. He sugests that when I have finished all the pages go over them again one after the other to make sure the type is consistant and the double spread look right together.

For Dan's brief we spoke about the neon posters. He says the type is very reserved and should be louder for a poster. I will play around more with these. As for the business cards he agrees that the logo is strong, so I should focus on that. I have decided to use the lazer cutter, with is something I will show Dan and get his feedback.

Typos: meeting with Steph on the 16th to start publication.
Leeds Market: need to pick colour palette. Make map first! (I think for me this is the easiest part).